作文、2010年我参加上海世博

篇一:《上海世博作文》

The World Expo in 2010（世博会）英文作文

The World Expo in 2010(2010年世博会)

The World Expo in 2010

Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. ()ur government

has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.

How To Be A Lovely Citizen(如何成为一个可爱的上海人)

Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now. As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit. First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful. Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others. Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze On Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”

2)产生这一现象的原因

3)你的看法

Certificate Craze On Campus

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本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述近几年大学校园内的“考证热”;分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取各种证书的主要原因;阐述“我”对大学生“考证热”的看法。

高分范文

Certificate Craze On Campus

In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. [1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind. [4]Why does this craze appear?

[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one

make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.

[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it comes to certificates,

[9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability

[10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value.

【亮点点评】

[1]祈使句使用恰当。randomly意为“随意地，随机地”。

[2]限定词使用恰当，使文章表达更严谨，增强了说服力。

[3]that引导同位语从句，修饰the idea。

[4]设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。

[5]强调句型，此处是强调主语。

[6]which引导非限制性定语从句，充当介词宾语。

[7]用于引出“我”的观点。

[8]“当谈到或提及…时”。

[9]since引导原因状语从句，表示既定的原因，常译为“既然”。

[10]“只是，仅仅”。“而不是”。

佳句临摩

1.佳句：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. 临摩：离婚率上升尽管令人难过，但却是不争的事实。

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2.佳句：Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability.

临摩： 在过去的三十年，发展中国家在许多方面都取得了很大的进步，其中包括健康水平的提高。

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3.佳句：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates. 临摩：我认为，对于我们来说，更重要的是尽可能提高自己的能力而不是获得更多的证书。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)现在很多大学生都喜欢追求名牌

2)产生这种现象的原因是什么

3)你如何看待这一现象

Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands

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行文思路

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述目前热衷于大学生追求名牌的现象;分析大学生热衷名牌的原因;阐述“我”对大学生追求名牌的看法并提出建议。

高分范文

Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands

Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands. [2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.

[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands.{作文、2010年我参加上海世博}.

[2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. [2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students. [2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.

[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.

[3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability. [3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class. [3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.

【亮点点评】

[1]“有…倾向”。

[2]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、意义连贯。

[3] follow表示“跟随，追求(趋势或时尚)”

[4]用于引出原因。

[5]which引导非限制性定语从句。

[6] it为形式主语，不定式为真正主语。

[7]“远远超出他们的消费能力”。beyond表示“超出…范围”。

[8]强调句型，此处是强调主语。not…but连接并列成分。

[9]“而不是”。

佳句临摹

1. 佳句：It is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.

临摹：对大学生来说，了解校园以外的世界是非常必要的。

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2. 佳句：In modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which have a great attraction to young college students.

临摹：在世界上或许没有什么游戏像赌博

像赌博的那么有害和危险了，它经常会导致一个人破产，还会玷污人的心灵。

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3. 佳句：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands.

临摹：很多同学经常玩电脑游戏，这是浪费时间，而不是一种有益的放松方式。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese：

1)简单介绍个人情况

2)说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额

3)保证会合理利用贷款并表明还款的决心

A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan

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本题属于情景式命题，要求写一封申请信。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：简单介绍自己的情况，表明写信目的：申请助学贷款;说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额;保证合理利用贷款并表明还款决心，最后表示感谢。

高分范文

A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan

Sep 12th, 2008

To whom it may concern,

I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics. I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years.

My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.{作文、2010年我参加上海世博}.

[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. [4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Song Xue

【亮点点评】

[1]“主修…”，现在分词作伴随状语。

[2]“超出…的能力范围”。

[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。

[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

[5]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构。

[6]“我保证…”，that引导同位语从句。

[7]“不遗余力”。

佳句临摩

1.佳句：To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.

临摩：令人更迷惑不解的是，很多飞机都从大海上离奇消失了。

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2.佳句：Therefore, the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.

临摩：由于周围交通不便利，人们只得步行回家。

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3.佳句：Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan.

临摩：全国人民都不遗余力地支持北京举办奥运会

篇二:《上海世博英文作文》

上海世博英文作文：我想成为2010世博会的志愿者

The World Expo is a large-scale, global, non-commercial Expo. The hosting of

the World Expo must be applied for by a country and approved by the

international World Expo committee. Expo aims to promote the exchange of ideas and development of the world economy, culture, science and technology, to

allow exhibitors to publicise and display their achievements and improve international relationships. Accordingly, the World Expo with its 150-year history is regarded as the Olympic Games of the economy, science and technology. Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. Our government has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai,

as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to

help foreigners know more.

The World Expo in 2010（世博会）英文作文

The World Expo in 2010(2010年世博会)

The World Expo in 2010

Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long

history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is

an honor for all of the Asians. ()ur government

has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host

city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in

Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in

the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.

How To Be A Lovely Citizen(如何成为一个可爱的上海人)

Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more

people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai

now. As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my

bit. First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more

beautiful. Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from

others. Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better

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for my city in the future.

地震作文，依情况更改

Everyone has some unforgettable experiences.

Last Monday, there was a serious earthquake in Sichuan Province. Many people were killed. A large number of houses collapsed. I was shocked. When I see theses pictures on TV, my eyes were filled with tears. I wanted to do something for people in the disaster areas.

Two days later, in front of the library of our school, almost all of the teachers and students came to donate money. I was moved. I thought although I couldn’t go to Sichuan like the soldiers and the doctors, I still wanted to try my best to help them. I took out all my pocket money and threw it into the donation box. I hope they can rebuild their homeland early. It will be an unforgettable experience in my life. It makes me experience that if everyone makes a contribution for our country, we can overcome any difficulties.

Everyone has some unforgettable experiences.

Everyone knows there was a serious earthquake on May 12th in Sichuan Province. Thousands of people died and houses collapsed. That evening, I watched TV with my family. Both I and my parents were shocked. So we decided to donate for them at once. I took out all of my pocket money. When I put them into the donation box, I was so moving that my eyes were filled with tears.

Now, more and more people and volunteers go to disaster area to help people who are in trouble. President Hu says: “we will try our best to save more people and we never give up! ”I believe that if everyone makes a contribution, we will overcome any difficulties and tomorrow will be better!

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篇三:《2011年中考语文作文资料[1]》

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篇四:《2010年上海、北京作文》

2010年上海卷作文题 （材料作文）

根据以下材料，选取一个角度，自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的文章（不要写成诗歌）。

丹麦人去钓鱼会随身带一把尺子，钓到鱼，常常用尺子量一量，将不够尺寸的小鱼放回河里。他们说：“让小鱼长大不更好吗？”两千多年前，我国孟子曾说过“数罟不入洿池，鱼鳖不可胜食也。”意思是，不要用细密的渔网在池塘里捕捞小鱼，这样才会有更多的鱼。

实际上，其中的道理也贯穿在我们现实生活中的许多方面。

上海2010年高考优秀作文揭秘：为何能拿高分

什么样的作文能得高分？本期升学周刊独家刊登六篇高考优秀作文，希望能给读者一些启发。临渊羡鱼，不如退而结网。对于一类上的高考作文，普通大众读过后，心悦诚服地赞一声好，满足了好奇心也就作罢。而对高中生来说，除了欣赏之外，还可以从中学习和总结：这篇作文何以得到高分，哪些优点可以为我所用，如何才能写得更好。

“核心内容”和“不预设主题”

从主题来看，《善擒者亦善纵》、《舍小利以谋远》、《放宽网眼，让学术长大》和《滋养文化的“活鱼”》较为相近，后两者更是将论点指向具体角度；《我们自私的“智慧”》和《稚嫩的童年》则是反弹琵琶，用逆向思维表达近乎相反的论点。

其实，这些作文的观点都没有错，他们站在不同角度诠释，围绕的却是同样的核心内容。

早在高考之前，就有权威专家介绍过近年来上海高考作文阅卷的一项基本原则：不预设主题。这并不是说，考生想怎么写就可以怎么写，而必须要读懂材料，把握材料的核心内容，方可在不离核心内容的情况下从不同角度立意。如果只是搭点材料的边，与材料所反映的核心意思(本质)无关的，就是离题。如针对有考生表达“人与自然的和谐”这一立意，其实也是偏离了材料的主要意思，因为材料的主要意思在于放小鱼是为了将来得到大鱼；而“人与自然的和谐”则是强调二者的平等关系。

文学的魅力之一，就是具有多义性和扩散性。对同一段材料，不同的读者，会因为自身不同的眼光、修养和情绪获得不同的审美感受。材料作文题目只有一小段文字，同样也有这样的效果，如果阅卷者一定要用一个明确固定的主题，或者中心思想来限定某段材料包涵的寓意，这当然是不全面的。

高考期间，记者向多位特级教师请教过今年高考作文题的解析思路。仔细推敲，各位名师说法也是稍有差异的，有的老师说这是“度”的概念，有的老师认为可以落在“取”和“舍”上面，有的老师则提出论点可以是“事物的发展都需要一个过程”??可以看出，很难用一个明确具体的主题，或者中心思想来把各位老师的观点糅合在一起。

那么，考生该怎么办？不要拘泥于自己的作文是否符合材料可能体现的主题、中心思想，或者核心思想，考生只要读懂了材料，在把握材料的基本意思的前提下，有自己独特见解，并且议论时有说服力，就可以得到高分。

“华而不实”和“有说服力”

近年来，高考阅卷中心组老师多次提出要杜绝“华而不实”的文风，提醒考生切勿堆砌华丽辞藻和名人名言，但这并非是对文采和才华的否定。这是对基于考生的整体水平(大部分考生的作文水平是中等水平)和考场的特殊条件(一小时内完成)的考虑，能够写出“华而实”作文的考生毕竟很少，但是如果有，阅卷老师同样会欣赏。

所幸，近两年“华而不实”的文风已大有改观，阅卷老师的坚持对中学教育界有了不小的影响，学生的写作正逐渐摆脱“假大空”的坏习惯。现在，阅卷组对高考作文的要求更加细化：要有“说服力”！也就是要让阅卷者看到你的观点不是简单苍白的，证明过程是合情合理又不是简单套话。这就要求考生在形式创新和思想创新上下功夫，如在论证方法上做文章，除了例证法还要有对比论证、喻证法、引证法等。 《我们自私的“智慧”》这篇作文在开头和结尾引用了两段名言，这样的引用，甚至让人想起在“狮城舌战”，最佳辩手蒋昌建在论述自己的观点“人性本恶”时，画龙点睛般引用了一句顾城的诗“黑夜给了我黑色的眼，我却要用它寻找光明”，因为贴切，因为符合语境，多年之后依然让人难忘。考生在这里引用的向阳的诗，同样也有这样的效果，在阅卷教师眼里同样会留下美好的印象。

没有一定的文化积累，考生很难写出《我们自私的“智慧”》这类作文，但是像《稚嫩的童年》、《舍小利以谋远》这样很有说服力的优秀作文却是可以模仿、写出的。{作文、2010年我参加上海世博}.

新加坡《联合早报》评此题：

这个题目很明显是对应当下最热门的话题，可持续发展、低碳生活、更美好和谐的城市生活??对关注时事的上海学生来说，应该都不难发挥。

报章媒体循例在隔天跟着做文章，访问的专家学者莫不以生态环保、城市和谐？？等角度评论一番。 环保、低碳既是上海世博会所要呈现的重点，也是当前世界最热门的课题之一，更可能是未来世界经济发展的重要方向。通过作文选题的方式让莘莘学子对课题做一番思考，不能不说切合时宜。

但是如果能允许学生引而申之，从自然与环境更进一步朝当前中国社会与人文的失衡去想，可能更有助于建立学子对社会的关怀精神。

孟子那句话是在与梁惠王对答的时候说的，好战的梁惠王认为自己治国很用心，但是人口没有增加，反观邻国君主治国没那么用心，人口却没有减少，他问孟子为什么。

孟子显然不认同梁惠王治国用心的说法，他认为真正的治国用心，应该体现在给老百姓安居乐业。农耕的季节到了，不会因为其他事务――主要是指战争和徭役――而耽搁；此外，教育、养老、温饱统统有着落，从生养到死葬都没有让百姓抱怨的地方，那么就是王道的开始，四邻的人民自然会想迁移而来，人口就会增加。而要做到这些，按照时节规律伐木和捕捞就很重要，植物能安然生长，百姓就有衣帛可穿，牲畜能安然繁殖，人民就有肉可吃。

按时节伐木和捕捞，是顺应大自然的生殖繁衍，给予休养生息的机会，反之用细密的渔网把大鱼小鱼都捕捞了，不问时令把大树小树都砍伐了，不但是危害生态，更会影响到人民未来的生计。古代的民生多靠天吃饭，生态失衡往往就引发天灾，但是孟子要强调的其实是生态失衡与否，百姓安全、温饱与否，跟政府的政策有密切关系。

丹麦人钓鱼的时候可以不自欺地把小鱼放回大自然继续生长，是千锤百炼出来的守法精神和法治文化，这在目前的中国显然还做不到。而政府政策能不能在强大国家实力与富裕百姓民生之间取得真正的平衡，不为了经济收益而任由企业用绵密的网挤压民力，这都是丹麦人和孟子的智慧所要表达的。

中国对煤矿的依赖非常大，对生产线也是如此，而无论是矿工还是流水线上的工人，甚至整个社会的底层，从经济上看其实都像小鱼一样，一点都不肥美，法律与政策能不能使他们获得放生壮大的机会，考验的是政府这个超级考生。

学生大概不能在考卷上陈述太多社会批评观点，不过能否从这一层面思考，其实很重要，因为这是中国古已有之的政治智慧，也是普世价值，教与学甚至官与民双方能不能从中找到理解社会发展的共同基础，关乎两代人、两个阶层在政治与社会观点上的默契。

优秀作文：

（一）放宽网眼，让学术长大

孟老先生有云“数罟不入洿池，鱼鳖不可胜食也。 ”然在我们这个日益呼吁诺贝尔奖，召唤大师的年代，无数专家迫不及待地跳入渔网，以求短期内涅化为大师。这不仅使人惊呼“收获”更多的同时惊疑，“将来会有什么？ ”

对硕士、博士、导师、学者的种种论文指标，舆论对大师，对诺贝尔奖的偏执的渴盼化为一张张细密的渔网，捞起了本应该继续成长的小鱼，留下一潭池水。{作文、2010年我参加上海世博}.

“古人学问无遗力，少壮功夫老始成”，可见做学问，做出真正具有价值的学问是需要长时间。司马公三十年著《史记》，曹雪芹十年语红楼，这其中凝聚着他们的血与泪，超绝的学者必使用超长的时间来成长。由此看来，我们今天那细网中无数未成大鱼专家们大师背后浮现的是一个个看似华丽的泡沫。何不将网眼放宽，让鱼儿们有更多时间来经历人生，充分成长？

除了时间，细雨带去的还有学者们本应坚守的宁静。学者，本应是耐得寂寞的。钱钟书先生笔耕一生，留下无数让人惊叹的华章 《围城》、《谈艺录》、《管锥篇》，先生以他的博学一次次震惊世界，然而人们在惊于其文时却总是忽略先生两耳不闻窗外尘嚣事的用心苦读，忘却了先生图书馆的一杯淡茶，一本书的宁静身影。“梦醒推窗望残月，哪堪只影映孤墙”，也许，只有宁静淡泊的心才能在文化的殿堂中行得更远。书中曾说到剑桥为霍金留下了一个宁静的空间，可我们为什么就一定要急于将学者们套入网中，曝于公众之下，给他们留下一片宁静吧！{作文、2010年我参加上海世博}.

使鱼们甘于入网的另一个原因是名利。不可否认，求得一桩大富贵自古就是文人们读书的重要原因，但，那些真正名垂青史的，却大多没入名利场。孔子曰：“学之者不如乐之者”，可见他不甚赞赏为名利而做学问的行为。看淡了眼前的富贵，忘却了功名利禄，留得那颗菩提心，学问之门方可开。塞林格先生以《麦田的守望者》轰动世界后却躲入乡下小镇，从此远离喧嚣。他在逃避什么？他在守望什么？

那是一颗融于学术、融于艺术的心，那是一把打开精神高处的钥匙。“忍把浮名换了浅吟低唱”，柳永如是说。让我们给学者们留下一片不受世俗名利亵渎的净土吧！莫急于让他们被浮名的心网套牢，莫让伊甸化作失乐园。他们需要的是心灵的纯净与人格的独立，不是名为专家、大师的锁链，不要束缚了学者们心灵的翅膀。

何妨让我们把种种网眼留得更宽一些，把急躁的心平淡一些，三十年后再来收获这一批长成的大师。

（二）滋养文化的“活鱼”

《阿凡达》的光芒照射整个地球村。我国一名导演陆川曾经说过一句话，审视国内电影与卡梅隆的大作间的距离，我们不禁要问自己缺乏的到底是资金、技术还是真诚的心？ （由平时有印象的某名人某句话开头??）

丹麦人有自己独到的智慧，尺寸不够的鱼让它们放生不是更好吗？我国先贤孟子在冥冥之中，也将智慧的火光迸发于此。我宁愿相信，让小鱼长大不只是单纯的智慧，更是一种气度和心胸。！！！

余秋雨撰写《文化苦旅》时耗费了诸多日夜。但那不是空洞的时光。背起行囊，徜徉于江南水乡的旖旎温婉抑或是行走于丝绸之路的大漠孤烟，都是文化人必不可少的生命体验。

喜爱文学的我常常有这样的体会，锱铢必较想精心斟酌每个字时，文章已于无形中失色，因为计较投入与产出比率的心思太多。当与自然为伴与生活为友，信手拈来有感而发，那种畅快才是无与伦比的。不难理解近年来网络写手层出不穷，又如昙花一现般迅速沉寂是为什么？兴许我们的鼠标会短暂青睐无厘头的文字，但我们的心不会长久接纳文字背后的浮华与短视。

你有勇气像卡梅隆一样拍完令世人惊艳的 《泰坦尼克号》花十几年光阴去打磨一部巨作吗？你有决心像余秋雨带着一颗深味人世沧桑的心踏上旅途边走边记吗？不用细密渔网在池塘里捕捞小鱼，折射出的是一份安然、平和的心境。

我们常说人的欲望是无限的，要会舍才会得。但我想这当中除了舍得的辩证，更需要的要有一颗甘于等待的心。敢于放弃这一刻的光华，等待整个太阳的普照，甘于让青柿子待在树上挂着秋霜，等待下一季满枝盈盈的硕果。对于每一个人，这种等待的方式有所不同，对于文化人来说，这份宁静的守候尤为关键。不要做只为一首歌脍炙人口的歌手，要做让音乐渗透几代人心灵的歌手；不要做只为票房而浪费胶片的导演，要做让唯美画面永驻人心的制作人。

文化创办的起因动念繁多，但归宿只有一个，让文化滋养人心，润物无声地抚摸我们的灵魂。陆川对卡梅隆的崇拜不如说是对丹麦人和孟子的崇拜。每个文化人担负起圣洁的文化使命，整个民族的华丽转身就不难看到。

把网撒开吧，只默默等待鱼儿长大，用这样的情怀不仅拥抱艺术，更要拥抱生活的每个片段。唯有为那些大美、大爱和大求预设空间，鱼儿才得到活水的滋养。到那时闲看花开花落，做观云卷云舒，一拉钓竿，一切尽在不言之中??

评：（一）（二）两文首先有自己切入问题的兴趣点——学术和文化（电影等），或者说就是平时生活中自己比较有观察、有心得、有把握优势的两个点。在这两大领域中“结网”捕捉题意这条大鱼，驾轻就熟，顺势而为，就比较能发挥自己的基础优势和明确见解，也可见平时的积累功夫，这个积累指的不是死记硬背某些材料，而是平时对某类现象和问题的有心用心，即平时已经准确聚焦，考场上按动快门而已。

（一）针对目前的学术腐败，追根溯源，高屋建瓴，有一定文化底气才能把握；（二）基本从电影这个小切口披文入理，针对的是当前文化心态的浮躁，比较切合现实，又具备长远意义。