数据的作文

admin 初三作文 2020-04-23 01:56:18 雅思作文

篇一:《数据作文》

The following appeared in a memo from the president of Bower Builders, a company that constructs new homes. "A nationwide survey reveals that the two most desired home features are a bathroom with a whirlpool tub and a large kitchen. Homes in a nearby development built by our competitor, Domus Construction, have whirlpool tubs and have sold much faster and at significantly higher prices than the average. To increase our sales and profits, we should include whirlpool tubs and larger kitchens as standard features in all our new homes. Since our recent buyers have voiced no complaints about small yards, we can also increase profits by decreasing the size of our yards." The following appeared in a memo from a budget planner in Sophia County.

"Census data indicate that the number of retired couples without children who are moving into Sophia County is steadily rising; private schools in our county report substantial increases in enrollment; and a statewide survey of parents shows that over 10 percent now support the idea of home schooling instead of public schooling funded by the county government. Such demographic trends suggest that our county will not have to construct new school buildings and that we can therefore decrease the budget for county-funded public schools."

The following appeared in a magazine focusing on health and fitness.

"A recent study of several nutritional supplements showed that subjects who took a daily pill containing luceen had significantly better vision of distant objects than subjects in the study who took other nutritional supplements. Luceen appears naturally in a tasty fruit that grows on the island of Bonopia, and very few inhabitants of that island wear eyeglasses or other corrective lenses. Such evidence suggests that people who develop vision problems should take regular luceen supplements.

篇二:《雅思小作文数据写法总结》

雅思小作文数据写法总结

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一、介词

1. from表示变化初始值，to表示趋势变化到…（from可以选择性的不写） The number of divorces increased from 1m in 1970 to almost 1.5m in 1980.

2. by, of表示数值变化差，搭配to/from使用{数据的作文}.

1) by用在表趋势的动词后，表示变化了多少

The proportion of married people decreased by 11% to about 59% in 2000.

2) of用在表趋势的名词后

The proportion of married people underwent a decrease of 11% to about 59% in 2000.

3) 另外还可以不用介词，直接数字＋趋势名词

There was an 11% decline to around 59% in 2000 in the proportion of married people. 3. at表示在某一点

The number of marriages leveled off at 2.5m (million) during the first decade. The minutes of local fixed line calls reached the peak at around 90 billion in 1999.

4. with带一个或几个静止的数值

1) England is where the most books are bought with 81% of the market. Wales comes next with 10%, closely followed by Scotland with 8%. Northern Ireland lies last with only 1% of the market.

In 1979, beef was the most popular of these food, with about 225 grams per person per week.

2) Three of these countries shared similar figures with 6.63% in Turkey, 6.51% Spain and 6.43% in Ireland.

二、括号

1) 可以用在句中

The next two decades witnessed a steady fall to the initial level (1million) in 2000.

2) 可以用在句末{数据的作文}.

People in Turkey spent on food, drinks and tobacco with the largest percentage (32.14%).

3) 可以带静止数据

Specifically, deforestation was the number one murder (9.8%), followed by over-cultivation and over-grazing (7.7% and 5.5% respectively).

4) 可以带动态数据

There was an overall slight increase in both nuclear and solar/wind (up by 3q and 2q respectively).

Both nuclear power and oil went up during the period, although the rise of oil was not

as dramatic as that of nuclear power (from 15, 20 to 126, 25 respectively).

三、定语从句

与括号类似，都起到解释的作用。以上例句的括号都可以变为定语从句，只要在括号内容前加which+动词即可。

－The next two decades witnessed a steady fall to the initial level, which was 1m in 2000.

－People in Turkey spent on food, drinks and tobacco with the largest percentage, which was 32.14%.

－Specifically, deforestation was the number one murder, which accounted for 9.8%, followed by over-cultivation and over-grazing, which constituted 7.7% and 5.5% respectively.

－There was a slight increase in both nuclear and solar/wind, which was up by 3q and 2q respectively.

－Both nuclear power and oil went up during the period, although the rise of oil was not as dramatic as that of nuclear power, which increased from 15, 20 to 126, 25 respectively.

篇三:《一动一静轻松解决雅思数据类小作文》

一动一静轻松解决雅思数据类小作文

纵观历年雅思官方公布的全球雅思考生分数统计，中国考生的写作单项成绩一直扮演着拖后腿的角色(如2011年四项平均分5.6，写作单项5.2)。面对这一现状，众烤鸭们往往在正式备考开始前就对写作有了畏惧心理。其实，大家稍有了解就可以知道雅思写作考查两项任务：图表分析和议论文写作。对中国考生来说，议论文写作并不新鲜，因为不管是高中英语作文还是大学英语四六级考试都涉及对主观论述能力的考察。相较而言，图表分析却是多数考生未曾触笔的领域。因此，熟悉各类图表的分析和描述对快速提高雅思成绩将大有裨益。

雅思写作图表分析，俗称小作文，建议写作时间20分钟，字数最低要求150字，分值对写作单项成绩的贡献为1/3，题型包括数据类(line, pie, bar, table)和非数据类(diagram, map)两种。根据对近几年的考题分析可得，数据类考查的几率为85%以上，非数据类图形的考查几率仅为百分之十几，也就是说流程图和地图题平均每年出现3到5次。了解各题型的考查频率，对考生的备考方向有很大指导意义。题型频次意味着数据类图形应成为烤鸭们备考小作文的重点。可喜的是，这一重点项目很有规律性，不管考生之前有否了解数据图表分析，皆可在短时间内习得应对的思路和方法。这一方法就是学会动静结合的辩证分析图表。雅思数据类小作文主要也就分为线图、饼图、柱图和表格四种。这四种图形无非从动态变化和静态比较这两方面去反应描述对象，因此运用基本的动静哲学观就可破解所有数据类小作文。下面，我们一起来探讨下如何应用。

解题最重要的当然是审题。审题环节我们应该明确两个要素：一是该图表所描述的对象;二是该图表有无时间变化要素。明确描述对象是为了确保作文阐述的主题不出错。明确有无时间变化来决定走动静哪条思路。{数据的作文}.

如上图所示，若是一个有时间变化的图形，我们就采取与时俱进的思路，依据时间描述对象所经历的变化，写出重要的信息点。这种题目典型代表是线形图，也就是任何有时间变化概念的图表题都可以转化成线图来写。这样我们只要掌握线图写作所需的词汇、句型和衔接策略就可以了。若是图形没有时间概念，那我们就走定时定点的思路，也就是重点比较各对象之间和对象内部各要素的大小，突显重要信息即可。这一思路的代表题型是饼图，对待没有时间变化概念的图形不管是bar还是table都可以运用饼图的素材和思路进行写作。

下面我们以例题来演练一下：

Sample 1

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country

between 1979 and 2004.

本题的描述对象为各类不同肉食的消费量(the consumption of …), 也就是说图形展示的变化指的是消费使用量的变化，而不是各种肉本身。第二个要素，从题目陈述就可看出本题有时间跨度，1979至2004年。对于有时间跨度的图形，我们一概使用动态的解题思路，即描述各对象随着时间所发生的变化。线图重要信息为起始点、变化趋势、极值点、相同点或转折点。重要信息点的确立有其深刻的意义，起始点定位了描述对象起步和终点的状态，趋势表示对象的经历，极值限制了描述对象变动的区间，相同或转折点则常常表明了各对象之间的关系。

将分析的信息组织到正文段落可得：

In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams). (起点描述和比较){数据的作文}.

However/ From then on, during this 25-year period the concumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less

significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable. (重要趋势和终点描述)

The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week. (重要趋势、交点和最值描述)

Sample 2

有时间的表格，可以将其转化为4条关于婚姻数据的曲线。

分别是一婚、再婚、结婚和离婚。从意义上看前3者属于一群组，说的都是结婚数据，而第4条是另一组，关于离婚的。依次描写各线的变化趋势，找出起始点、最值点，比较不同组之间的趋势即可得到主体段。{数据的作文}.

The number of first marriages was 330 thousand in 1950, increasing steadily for the following two decades, peaking at 389 thousand in 1970. However, from then on, it experienced a sharp fall to 180 thousand in 2000, the lowest of the whole period. (一婚)

Similarly, the number of re-marriages had generally increased from 78 thousand in 1950 to a peak of 140 thousand in 1980, with its lowest point(57,000)hit in 1960. And from then on, there was a slight decrease in the number of people who re-married, at 135,000 and 126,000 respectively. (再婚)

Since the number of marriages is the total of those of first marriages and re-marriages, we can see that it experienced a sharp decline, with the hightest point(471,000) reached in 1970 and the lowest point (306,000) in 2000. (结婚){数据的作文}.

In contrast to the general downward trend in the number of marriages, that of divorces had nearly tripled, increasing dramatically from 33,000 in 1950 to 168,000 in 1990. Despite a slight fall, the year 2000 also witnessed a height of 155 thousand. (离婚)

Sample 3

无时间变化的柱图，就以静态数据比大小的思路来解题。

一般情况下可将图形包含的数据列出来，也可以直接标在图上，以便于比较大小。

本题通过比较男生女生所持同类证书的比重可将图形分为2类：

男高于女，即大专和研究生层次

男低于女，本科层次

然后依次对各组进行比较对比描写即可。

Sample 4

The pie charts show the amount of oil production and consumption measured in million barrels per day(MB/D) in seven regions in the year 2005.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

无时间变化的多饼图，注重饼与饼之间同图标部分的大小比较。

本题说的是石油的产出和消耗，通过比较可将图中7个区域分成两组，即石油产量大于消耗量的一组，石油产量小于消耗量的一组，然后依次按差值顺序描写各组成员的产与耗即可。