首页 > 作文 > 初中生作文 > 初三作文

《认错》的作文

admin 初三作文 2020-04-23 02:15:18 道歉作文

篇一:《小学作文:认错》

认错

在公园的长椅上,有两位正哈哈痴笑的少年,一个嘴边沾着蛋糕屑,歪躺在椅子上;另一个正拿着石头扔向水中,逗得鱼儿不住地乱窜。云儿也陶醉于我们的友谊,在夕阳下……

我与杨明,一对最要好的朋友。此刻他正在手工小组里展示我一个月的心血??一艘号称“赛尔号”的小木船。在众人羡慕的目光中杨明飘飘然了,一下没站稳,连人带船摔倒在地上,小木船也被摔坏了。“哈哈,谢天谢地,还能修好,不要紧。”他万分庆幸地说。现在回想起来,我那时也显得格外小气。看着那凝聚了我一个月心血的小木船“粉身碎骨”,我不依不饶起来:“你以为这样就没事了?快给我一个新的,否则我跟你没完!”杨明也火了,一对要好的朋友就这样争吵起来。争吵中,围观的同学不经意间把船彻底踩坏了。我更是气急了眼,冷不防一把抢过他的另一艘小船,狠狠地摔在地上。望着目瞪口呆的他,我一脸的得意,他却捡起船默默地走开了。我肯定伤了他的心,虽然我当时并没有这么说。

时间悄悄地过去,转眼就是深秋了,天气格外地冷。杨明一连几天都没来上学,他家里人来电话说他生病了。班主任刘老师组织同学们去看望他,并特意叫上了我。我心里是一百二十万个不愿意啊!无奈师命难为,只好一同前往,唉!

江南小区B栋5楼3号,杨明正虚弱地躺在床上。我的鼻子陡然一阵酸:他那脸变得多瘦啊!老师塞给我一束百合,怒放的纯白色,我把花轻轻放在床边,支支吾吾地说了一句憋在我心里许久的话:“对不起,祝你早日康复。”他看着我笑了笑,从床头柜里取出了一艘样式新颖的军舰??比我以前的要好。

“给我?”我失口而出。他笑了笑,这时,我什么都明白了, 脸刷地红到了脖子根。

第二天,太阳比金黄的稻田还要美丽,照射着一束纯白的百合与一艘样式新颖的军舰??比我以前的要好。

篇二:《关于道歉的作文:道歉》

关于道歉的作文:道歉

关于道歉的作文:道歉

我有一个“死党”小Z。

先说说怎么与他相遇的。一年级的时候我很孤独,只能围沿着操场一圈圈地慢慢走。有一天,一大群人影我眼前闪过,我抬起头,小Z和一群男生跑过,我想交个朋友,便加入一起玩,玩着玩着,与他就成了朋友。

我们关系非常铁,可是一次意外,断绝了我们的友情。一次小Z说了我的坏话,我开始并不在意,可是这句话像一只臭虫一样,弄得我心里烦躁不安。上学一看到他,我心中的怒火就“蹭”地冒上来。为了报复,我也说了一句他的坏话,就这样,我俩你一句我一句地吵起来。上课老师讲什么,我一句也没听进去,我的大脑正在飞速运转,思考着怎样对他进行“二级报复”。下课。我一等他出了门,就把他的笔盒扔进垃圾桶。

最后,我们谁也不理谁,我们之间仿佛隔着一道无形的墙,僵持了一两个星期,我决定和他道歉,可我总觉得说不出口,要是道歉了,尊严、风度都说没了,而且毕竟是他先说我坏话的,我是“受害者”。上课时我坐如针毡,根本没心听课,我一直考虑要不要向他道歉。

一天,我看见小Z朝我走来,对我说:“唐唐,对不起,我不应该骂你。”他先来向我道歉了,让我深感意外,我头晃得像拨浪鼓,说:“哈哈,没事。”

我俩又和好如初。

篇三:《有关道歉的作文》{《认错》的作文}.

9. 抱歉:

We must apologize for …

We apologize for …

We are extremely sorry for …

注:以上句型后请使用动词ing形式。

以上句型中的for可以换成that,然后用从句表达。

一般来说,解释产生问题的原因,然后在信的结尾处再次表达歉意。

再次抱歉:

Please accept our apologies once again.

We hope that this has not caused you any inconvenience.

With apologies once again.

10. 要求提供信息:

Please could you

We would be grateful if you could

We would appreciate it if you could give us further details about ..

inform us (about/if) …

let us know ( about/if ) …

We would like to know ( about/if ) …

注:如果需要特别重要的信息,可以在以上句型前使用:in particular。

环境:

You wrote a letter to someone and they haven’t replied. You want to know if they received the letter.

We would be grateful if you could let us know if the letter has reached you.

A businessman is going to your country. He wants you to get a visa for him. You need all the details about his passport (his nationality, date of birth, where his passport was issued, and when it expires).

Please could you give details about your passport. I would like to know your nationality, date of birth, where your passport was issued and when it expires.

You want to know about the same businessman’s flight (flight number, date and time of arrival).

In particular, I would like to know your flight number, date and time of arrival.

11. 轻度抱怨:

Unfortunately, + 表示 something is wrong 的句子

环境:

A company has sent you a bill for the wrong goods.

Unfortunately you sent us a bill for the wrong goods. Please could you send us a correct bill as soon as possible.

Your new photocopier has broken down. You have to write to the company who sold it

to you.

Unfortunately our new photocopier has broken down. Please could you send a repairman to fix it for us as soon as possible.

Two temporary secretaries do not speak English. You have to write to the agency who sent them to you.

Unfortunately two temporary secretaries you recommended to us do not speak English. We would be grateful if you could recommend two more who could speak English. You keep receiving letters for someone else. You have to write to the post office. Unfortunately I keep receiving letters for someone else. Please could you make the address clear before you deliver letters every day.{《认错》的作文}.

12. 提醒某人对某事的注意:

I should like to draw your attention to (the fact that)…

I should like to point out that …

如果你提醒的事情对方已经知道(你想表达你的生气):

I should like to remind you that…

I hope that it is not necessary to remind you that …

环境:

One of your staff keeps parking his car in front of the main door, the space which is reserved for the MD.

I should like to remind you that the space in front of the main door is reserved for the MD.

Someone is interested in purchasing a large quantity of your simplex cameras. Tell him about 25% discount for large orders.

I should like t draw your attention to the fact that we offer about 25% discount for larger orders.

One of your staff arrives half an hour late for work every day. (She should start at

9.30.)

I hope that it is not necessary to remind you that work start at 9: 30 every day.

Someone is interested in your products. Tell him that you guarantee that your prices are the largest in the country.

I should like to point out that we guarantee that all prices are the lowest in the country.

13. 要求某人采取行动:

We must insist that …DO… (DO指动词原型)

注:请注意这一句型和句型8的区别。

环境:

We must insist that you deliver the goods immediately.

14. 警告:

Unless…

If…(not)… We will be forced to …

环境:(What warnings would you give these people?)

A company that has not paid your bill

Unless you pay the bill, we will be forced to take legal actions.

Another company that is using your company’s car park

If you do not move your car away from our park, we will be forced to turn to the police.

An employee who always arrives late for work

Unless you come to work on time, we will be forced to fire you.

A builder who has left a lot of their tools in your office

If you do not take your tools from our office, we will be forced to throw them away.

15. 强烈抱怨:

注:

强烈抱怨遵循以下步骤:

a. 阐述发生的问题:it is now over nine months since we placed this order and we are still waiting for the cabinets.

b. 使用句型12:I should like to point out that we have already paid for these cabinets. c. 使用句型 13:we must insist that you deliver them immediately.

d. 使用句型14:unless we hear from you within 7 days we will take legal action. 图表类作文常用句型

1. The diagram unfolds a clear comparison between…

2. The United States as a whole in four aspects,namely,***,***,***,***,

3. Obviously, in every aspect,

4. …had a much higher growth rate than… as a whole during that period.

5. The number of … increased by %

6. The most rapid increase of all the four aspects… As to the

other three,though the growth rates were not so high , they were indeed remarkable and impressive.

7. The number of… dropped by %

8. From the diagram it can be safely concluded that (in the years)…

9. There were many significant changes (in modes of transport)

10. The following paragraphs will identify and discuss the trends in the accompanying graph.

篇四:《材料作文迟来的道歉的例文及点评》{《认错》的作文}.

材料作文“迟来的道歉”的例文及点评

一、作文题目

阅读下面的文字,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章(60分)(2009年广州市高三年级调研测试)

2008年9月15日,英国圣公会向已故生物学家达尔文道歉,承认100多年前误解他提出的生物进化论

圣公会在致歉函中写道:“查尔斯&8226;达尔文先生,在你诞辰200周年即将到来之前,英国圣公会向你致歉,我们当初对你(的理论)作出错误反应,误解你且影响其他人对你的看法”

达尔文后人对圣公会的做法并不领情达尔文的玄孙认为,迟到百年的道歉“没有意义”批评人士称圣公会的这一举动“荒谬可笑”

要求选择一个角度构思作文,自主确定立意,确定文体,确定标题;不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文,不要套作,不得抄袭{《认错》的作文}.

【优秀例文1】

百年道歉不荒谬

英国圣公会向已故生物学家达尔文道歉,并承认一百多年前对生物进化论的反应是错误的这场“百年道歉”真让人感慨万千,可能有的人会为此对英国圣公会肃然起敬,可有人却认为此举甚是“荒谬”

那么此举是否荒谬呢?在我看来,百年道歉并不荒谬!

百年道歉是对真理的执着追求人,从山洞中走出,曾经铁犁牛耕,曾经男耕女织,经历了铅与火的变革,才走到了今天人类一步一个脚印地走,不正是一步一步丢弃愚昧的历程吗?错误并不可怕,可怕的是一错再错英国圣公会此举也正是沿着人类从无知到文明的道路走来的如果有人说英国圣公会荒谬,那么在他眼中,人类文明的产生岂不是荒唐的过程?“人非圣贤,孰能无过”?英国圣公会的道歉,是它对真理不倦的追求,是自我认识的伟大举动!苍天有灵,达尔文先生作为一代英才,其不会为圣公会此举含笑九泉?

百年道歉勇气可嘉很多人都会犯错,却不是每个人都有勇气站出来承认自己的错误的,只有勇士才能以一种横刀立马的姿态直面自身的错误,并且赢得人们的尊重!古时候,就有廉颇“负荆请罪”的故事,廉颇,作为一员堂堂武将,却深明大义,意识到自己的错误后,勇于向蔺相如请罪他这种认错的勇气一直被人们称道、仿效如今,英国圣公会发出“百年道歉”,岂不是有异曲同工之妙?我们为何要横加指责呢?如果这种认错的勇气都被视为“荒谬”的话,那么我们的世界也许真的就是一个“荒谬”的世界了!这种“荒谬”,理应得到推崇;这种“荒谬”,理应让无数无法站出面对自己错误的人相形见绌!这种“荒谬”,勇气可嘉!

我们的生活中,就需要这种“荒谬”!甚至可以说,如果我们的生活中缺少这种“荒谬”的品质,恐怕我们的世界便不再日趋进步了南京屠杀,让世人震惊,然而,这一事件的元凶,却一直未敢站出来道歉对此,一向强硬的韩国总统甚至发表《告国民书》来谴责这种行为,无数中国人更是愤慨不已在这方面,英国圣公会给怯懦的人立了一个学习的榜样{《认错》的作文}.

当然,英国圣公会不可否认造成了对达尔文先生的伤害,对社会造成了不良影响但我们更应该站在今天的立场上看等待这一事件人,不能总是只盯住别人的过去!

英国圣公会,你的追求,你的勇气,不会是荒谬!

【点评】针对材料中批评人士“荒谬可笑”的反应,鲜明提出自己“百年道歉不荒谬”的观点结合材料内容,就事论事,原事析理,既很好地落实了题目中“不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文”的要求,又使文章具有明确的针对性,避免了泛泛而谈而且,文章既处处紧扣材料来写,又旁征博引,联系实际,行文清晰自然,论述拓宽深入结尾一段在前面充分分析论述的基础上直抒胸臆,感情充沛热烈而又自然

【优秀例文2】

迟来的道歉不可笑

羊圈破损,面对着空无一“羊”的冷清,肯耐心细致地把它修复好的人并不可笑;洪水过后,面对着城毁人亡的沉痛,愿坚强地站起来投入救援的人并不可笑

同样,当错已铸成,当时移岁易,迟来的道歉并不显得可笑相反,这对于被侵犯者和侵犯者来说,都具有重要的意义

迟来的道歉,首先是对被侵犯者尊严的重建作为一场错误的受害者,他们失去的,并不只是生命或金钱,更是作为一个人,在这世上昂首挺胸的那份尊严十年文革,党中央犯下了许多错误政治领域,多位国家领导人,包括刘少奇主席,都蒙冤入狱;文化领域,许多知识分子,如老舍、季羡林等文坛老将都遭到了毫无理由的批斗和伤害在这场将民主和法制肆意践踏的风暴中,他们被侮辱、被唾骂,失去了太多的尊严文革结束后,党中央认识到所铸之错,在全国范围开展了“平反”活动,真诚地向各个被侵犯者致以道歉正是这样,广大知识分子才找回了问鼎学术巅峰的勇气以及自身的尊严迟来的道歉,就算在巨大的损失面前微不足道,但却十分关键,不容取笑

迟来的道歉,更是对侵犯者自身灵魂的救赎有时候,痛苦并不仅仅烙刻在被侵犯者的身上,后悔、愧疚,这些无休无止的负面情绪,同样会如漆黑的巨兽般吞噬着侵犯者自身的灵魂,让他们一刻不得安宁二战期间,犹太人被纳粹党大肆捕杀在奥斯维辛集中营,听到的,是男人的怒吼和女人的尖叫;看到的,是母亲的绝望和孩子们的惊恐德国人错了,他们的罪行让人触目惊心战争结束后,如梦初醒的德国人意识到了自己的滔天恶行,他们痛苦、内疚,在世界面前沉痛地低下头颅于是,德国的总理跪下了,用泪水与沉默来向犹太人道歉尽管,这道歉对于被侵犯的人来说太迟了,尽管,这错误并不因这道歉而如写在沙滩上的字迹随风易逝,但道歉,毕竟在一定程度上解放了侵犯者自身的灵魂这道歉,是神圣的、庄严的,并不好笑试想,若没有这场道歉,德国人民能够那么快重获世界人民的认可,让国家的经济迅速腾飞、一次又一次创造发展的奇迹吗?

亡羊补牢,为时未晚真诚的道歉,永远不会太迟如果说最近伊利、蒙牛等奶制品企业向广大消费者的道歉,能重新赢回消费者的信心和支持,那么,英国圣公会向达尔文的道歉,就算迟了100多年,也并非完全没有意义

清风依然,朗月依然,英国圣公会向达尔文的这场道歉,并不可笑

【点评】针对材料中批评人士“荒谬可笑”的反应,鲜明提出自己“迟来的道歉不可笑”的观点接着,作者从“首先是对被侵犯者尊严的重建”和“更是对侵犯者自身灵魂的救赎”两个角度进行分析,观点鲜明,行文层次非常清晰,值得学习借鉴本文语言流畅,开头和结尾有一定的文采

版权声明

本站文章收集于互联网,仅代表原作者观点,不代表本站立场,文章仅供学习观摩,请勿用于任何商业用途。
如有侵权请联系邮箱tuxing@rediffmail.com,我们将及时处理。本文地址:http://www.15033.cn/chuzhong/cszw/239187.html

中学网 - 让教育更简单

http://www.15033.cn/

蜀ICP备19007375号

Powered By 中学网版权所有