第一篇:《关于哥哥的作文:写给你——H哥哥》
关于哥哥的作文:写给你——H哥哥
摘要: H哥哥,
你说不可以把话统统都放在心里, 要学会和别人交流。
可是,
哥哥
你不懂,就算说了你也不会懂的。 你不是我,
你是活在阳光下的孩子,
我不是,
那天他们吵架,
你对我说了好多好多,
哥哥,
其实我知道,
你不说我也知道,
他们没有错,
他们都没有错,
或许你以为我在怪他们,
但是我从来没有过,{关于h的文章}.
这样的场面我已经习惯了。 在刀光剑影中心会麻木的, 只是慢慢的,
发现,
我只是他们的一个包袱,
他们吵架的原因不外乎是钱, 而钱,
呵,
如果没有我就不会为钱吵了, 所以,
我只是他们的一个包袱,
我本来是可以不存在这个世界, 本来是应该早早的就离开, 可是你们接纳了我,
学会感恩,
我懂,
可是现在我有些累,
每天面对爱我的人,
必须笑,{关于h的文章}.
不可以让泪水流出来,
H哥哥,
也许我的性格的确有些古怪, 请原谅,
在性格暴躁的他的影响下, 我的心应该是有了一些缺陷。 不过,
没关系我不在乎。
其实是很羡慕你,
有人爱,
而且不会有是包袱的想法,
没有没完没了的责骂和吵骂声。 哥,
说了这么多,
我想你还是不会懂的,
对不?
你不认识cw,
所以你也一定不会看见这篇文章, 算了,
什么都无所谓了。
哥,
你快乐幸福就好……
第二篇:《关于五一劳动节英语作文:我的五一假日(My May Day Holiday)》
关于五一劳动节英语作文:我的五一假日(My May Day Holiday) 关于五一劳动节英语作文:我的五一假日(My May Day Holiday) I had a great time throughout my May Day Holiday.
On Monday, I went BBQ with my classmates who threw a celebration party at our middle school principle's flat. Our parents were invited to the party. Everybody was excited about the holiday. I ate a lot of delicious food at that time.
On Tuesday, I went visiting my uncle's family with my parents. We went to celebrate our good time at a fancy restaurant in Shanghai. Later that day, we sang karaoke in my uncle's house. We stayed for the night.
On Wednesday, I went shopping with my cousins. We bought some brand name t-shirts and pants. In the afternoon, my cousins gave me a fun ride on the city highway. They also taught me how to drive their fancy car, so I tried to do some turning and parking. It was not easy first. But I learnt quick.
On Thursday, we returned home with many gifts from our trip. I tried to get some rest. At night, I chatted with my classmates on the phone, and I watched CCTV before going to bed.
From Friday on, I started to finish up my homework assignments on my personal laptop. Some of my assignments were quite boring. After I finished the homework, I emailed them to my teachers. That was the end of it. I started to prepare things for school on this coming Monday.
All in all, I enjoyed my May Day Holiday in many ways.
第三篇:《FchumbB8整理】雅思大作文写作方法 常用表达》
生命是永恒不断的创造,因为在它内部蕴含着过剩的精力,它不断流溢,越出时间和空间的界限,它不停地追求,以形形色色的自我表现的形式表现出来。
--泰戈尔
雅思大作文写作方法+常用表达
【Abby阿布整理】 2008.05
6 大作文task2
6.1雅思大作文评分标准细则
雅思大作文评分标准细则
6分:文章切题,语句通顺,没有明显错误(小错在6个以内),有一些比较不错的语句(复杂句、排比、倒装、从句等等)就是6分的标准了。
7分:文笔流畅,错误极少,有个别闪光点就是7分。
8分:论点新颖、别具一格,就是8分。或者论点一般,但十分切题,语言很漂亮,令人印象深刻。也是8分(不过一般这样也可以给7分)。
6.2 5~9分范文
范例6-1{关于h的文章}.
The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?{关于h的文章}.
It has been suggested that the government should take action on the violent films and televisions which posed the violent crimes in society .The implication and veracity of this idea seem reasonable but in fact require closer examination.
First of all, the course of the increasing of the crux of the violent crimes is not the violent films and televisions. The major reason is that the big gap between the poor and the rich and with people‟s moral character as well. As I see it, the governments are obligated to develop the economy and the consciousness.
In addition, if forbid the violence in films and on televisions, we will lose some excellent films, because to some action films, the quintessential part is violence and therefore, it is no benefit for neither film extent or culture.
What‟s more, violent films and televisions are good negative examples, for it gives people fears who commit violent crimes .A boy in my class, who has a fiery temper, often fights with others, Once he saw a violent film of a crippled actor because of the violence, he was worried and had a lesson on it which effects him a lot, finally he became a disciplined boy.
For these reasons I feel strongly that the film of violence should not be controlled and that we should objectively evaluate and criticize the issue , because we need different films and televisions, so we can learn something from them. (245words) 得分:5分
文章结构清晰,是一篇5段式的作文,但是在第4段中,作者其实是论述了与前两段不同的观点,但用的连接词却是what‟s more使得这段的真正意图没有体现出来。
从语言方面来说,似乎文章用了一些好词,如implication and veracity, crux, be obligated to等等,但是仍然有些低级的语法错误,如if forbid the violence in films and on televisions这个句子是没有主语的句子,是非常严重的错误,给考官的印象非常的不好。
其次,很明显,文章单词等级的跳跃性很大,第一段用的词都不较高级别,而第3段的词句很简单而且有严重的错误。
此外,由于文章的词数也没有达到最低要求,导致失分。 范例6-2
Some people think the function of university education is to prepare students for their future employment. However, others believe that it must have other important functions. Discuss and indicate what other functions the university education can provide.
Some hold that the function of university or college education is to help students to get ready for their future paying-job. While others consider that the use of university or college education is more than the mere function. As far as I am concerned, university must have other important functions in many aspects.
There is no doubt that we go to university to improve our skills and ability on coping with the things that would happen in our future job. But on campus it is not the only function. Because university is not only the place only to study in but is a part of society where we could learn how to communicate with each other and develop ourselves‟ personality.
Whichever universities or colleges are in the world are composed with people and buildings. They are just like a small society and we can take advantage of them to make friends with all kinds and{关于h的文章}.
backgrounds. How we could keep the friendship is one of function we should learn in the university before we go to the true society to hunt our career. Therefore, one of the functions of university education is that we could enlarge our relationship in the university.
Honest is also another function that we could learn in the university or college. Before we take the exam, we have to promise that we will not cheating during detest and when someone is caught for cheating, he (or she) will be punished strictly. Honest is one of the basic principles for each person.
University or college is not just a place for students only to prepare their future employment but a place that students could learn how to make friends and be hoesty.
(285words)
得分:6分
文章结构很清晰,5段是作文,首段和尾段分别是总起和总结;
文章句与句间的衔接处理地很一般,没有什么连接词来表达上下句的关系;
从语言方面来说,文章总体的语言水平尚可,句子很容易理解,但是也有很多语法错误,如Whichever universities or colleges are in the world are composed with people and buildings就写得很莫名。此外,文章的措辞很有限,没有什么同义词或词组的变换,句型也一般,没有太精彩的好句。 范例6-3
Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved facilities and better machinery. However, some of the methods may be dangerous to human health, and may have negative effects on local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As science in life prosper, a majority of good produced by high technology has been brought to the spotlight. Some people, therefore, reckon that several sorts of method through which food are produced have negative effects on peoples‟ health as well as local community. As far as I am concerned, this argument is quiet true.
The main reason usually given in favor of high technology using on food bringing negative effects is that the fertilizer. Farmers all anticipate their crops can grow well. However, flood or heavy rain may stop
第四篇:《h话题作文》
在2008年北京奥运会上,中国著名运动员刘翔因腿伤退出比赛,引起人们的广泛争议,下面是新浪网站的一项调查:
运动员受伤后,应该坚持还是应该退出?
请你结合上表,写一篇英语短文,谈谈自己的看法.
参考例文:
In the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games Chinese athlete Liu Xiang dropped out of the race due to his foot injury, which led to a heated discussion among people across the country.
According to a survey conducted by Sina Website, about 34% of the people think an athlete should quit the race when injured since health is much more important than a gold medal; While nearly 20% of the netizens believe that an injured athlete should hold on to the end instead of giving up halfway. They regard the sport field as a battlefield in which every athlete should fight for the honor of his or her country in spite of any difficulty.
In my opinion, it’s a right choice for Liu Xiang to choose to quit the race. For one thing, nothing is more important than health and sports doesn’t mean sacrificing one’s health for a gold medal; for another, after Liu Xiang recovers fully, he still has many chances to realize his dream. 热点7:奥运会获奖运动员的高薪问题
近几年,奥运会获奖运动员的高薪问题引起了广泛的社会关注。有些人支持这种做法,认为运动员们付出了很多努力,应该得到回报;有些人则持反对意见。请你就此写一篇100词左右的英语短文并发表自己的看法。
参考例文:
In recent years, the topic whether it is fair for athletes to pocket large sums of money has aroused more and more discussion.
Those who support giving sportsmen high salaries think that athletes have won a great reputation for our country in the Olympic Games. What’s more, athletes must undergo painstaking physical and psychological training. Besides, they offer a lot of encouragement to young people to take part in physical activities.
However, some people have different ideas. They consider that athletes do little to boost the national economy directly. Thus they should not receive so much money.
I believe that they should get high salaries, considering all the efforts they have made.{关于h的文章}.
最近,是否开征燃油税成了社会各界关注的热点问题。对此,人们普遍持两种观点。请根据以下要点,用英语写一篇150词左右的短文,并谈谈你自己的看法。
赞 成 反 对
1. 此政策已有试点,他们的经验能够推广;
2. 利于鼓励购买小型、节能汽车;
3. 利于保护环境,缓解交通压力。 1. 除了运输业,也涉及其它行业,会增加这些行业的成本;
2. 技术不过硬,质量高、油耗低的汽车 少;
你 的 观 点 1.……; 2. ……
注意: 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:燃油税 fuel tax 节能的 energy-efficient
One possible version:
Recently, the introduction of fuel tax has become a widespread concern. Generally, people hold two different views about it.
Those who support this policy desire to see it carried out as soon as possible. Their reasons are as follows. Firstly, the policy has been tried out in some areas in China, so the policy should be successful in the whole country. Besides, the policy is designed to encourage greater use of smaller and energy-efficient cars. What’s more, it is intended for people to use cars less often, which will not only be good for the environment but ease the pressure on traffic as well.
However, some people hold the opposite view. They argue that fuel tax may raise the cost of transportation as well as other industries. In addition, the technology for making energy-saving cars is not very advanced, which leads to a limited choice of such cars. As far as I’m concerned, though some people may feel unhappy when paying more for fuel at the beginning, this form. will surely benefit the environment and help to promote a healthy development of economy in the long run. Therefore, we should welcome this decision and support it.
9.
法国一家拍卖公司于今年2月25日在巴黎公开拍卖从中国掠夺的鼠首和兔首铜像, 此举激起中国人民的强烈愤慨。请你根据下表提示, 用英语写一篇短文。
1.鼠首和兔首铜像制作于清代, 是圆明园诸多装饰品之一;
文物背景 2.1860年, 英法联军火烧圆明园, 抢走包括鼠首和兔首铜像等在内的大
量文物。
1.今年二月在巴黎公开拍卖;
文物事件 2.中国政府坚决反对, 要求按国际法无偿归还;
3.法国公司一意孤行;
4.中国人民积极行动, 采取措施阻止拍卖。
你的感想 (请考生谈谈对此事的看法, 列举两至三条)
注意: 1.对所给要点, 逐一陈述, 可适当增加细节, 使其连贯, 不简单翻译。
2.词数: 150左右。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
3.参考词汇. auction n. & vt. 拍卖relic [C] n.文物, 遗物
Last month in Paris, a French company auctioned two bronze sculptures —- a rat’s head and a rabbits head captured from China, which has aroused great public concern in China.
the two bronze animal heads were made during the Qing Dynasty to decorate Yuanmingyuan. In 1860, the British and French troops broke into Beijing and burned The Chinese government is strongly against this auction and has repeatedly asked for the free return of them according to the international laws. the Chinese people have taken actions, too. Some people even flew to France, to stop the selling. the French company just wouldn’t listen. happening again.
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