作文：高三的一年总结

作文：高三的一年总结(一)

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2001年上海卷（春季）

Directions: Write an English composition in about 100-120 words, according to the instructions given in Chinese.

国际青年艺术节（the International Youth Art Festival）即将举行。作为一名志愿者，谈谈你的打算。

范文：

The International Youth Art Festival will be held in some days. As a volunteer, I will try my best to provide qualified service. At first, during these days, I will try to improve my spoken English so that I can talk with foreigners fluently and get my ideas across. Second, I will learn something from the participants of IYAF and cultivate my interest in Chinese as well as foreign arts. Third, I will take this chance to introduce more about Chinese culture to out foreign friends. If they are amazed at the great changes of Shanghai, I will show them around out beautify city. In a ward, I am proud of working as a volunteer in the IYAF. I will benefit from such working experience in both language learning and character development.

2005年上海卷（秋季）

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 古人云：“天生我才必有用”（There must be a use for my talent），通过描述你生活中的一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。 范文：

There is an old Chinese saying that there must be a use for my talent. I have regarded this as my motto for many years. From my point of view, everybody is good for something. With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to society.

When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of Pingyuan Road. He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wooden furniture. Every time people went to ask him to mend their furniture, he was willing to help them.

In his spare time, he would make toys with small pieces of wood. Some of them were sold to the toy store and the others were given to us. Whenever I see the lovely toys made by this old man, I remember my happy childhood.

From this old man, we can see whatever talent you have, you can find your own way of using it. The most important factor is your confidence. If you believe that there must be a use for your talent, you will find it.

议论文

2001年上海卷（秋季）

Directions: Write an English composition in over 120 words, according to the topic given in Chinese. 请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。 范文：

With more and more cars becoming popular means of transportation for many families in our society, our life style is changing greatly.

Automobiles have several advantages. Above all, it offers people freedom to go where they want to go. Besides, traveling to work by car is more comfortable, for they don’t have to waste their time waiting for buses or underground trains. In addition, much of the world’s economy is built on producing automobiles and supplying roads, services, and repairs for those vehicles.

In spite of their advantages, automobiles have many harmful effects on human lives. Cars often produce air pollution and fill the cities with unbearable noise. Moreover, cars are the major cause of road accidents. To own a private car in China today will bring you not only financial burden but also other troubles such as keeping the machine in good repair, finding a parking place at night.

In my opinion, car is a necessary evil in the modern society. When we use it, we can not ignore the problems it has brought about.

2009 年上海英语高考预测作文范文（三）

政府召集有关专家开会商讨如何解决交通拥堵，大家各抒己见：一、私家车增多，应提高税收，控制数量。二、路况恶劣，应扩建道路。三、人车混行，应分道行驶。

For the sake/purpose of solving the traffic problem the local government held a meeting recently at which many experts had a full discussion and put forward valuable suggestions.

First they pointed out that the cause of serious traffic jam was due to the increasing number of private cars. They held/maintained that raising the tax rates of using cars was oneof the most effective measures to limit this trend and people should be encouraged to make full use of public transportation.

The second leading / contributing factor that the government couldn’t neglect was the poor road conditions. Narrow streets inadequate traffic signs and false signal lights added to the trouble. It was suggested that old houses should be pulled down to make way for the traffic.

What’s more every day we could hear the endless running vehicles roaring through the narrow streets filled with anxious passing crowds. New regulations should be practically adopted to separate them for the sake of safety.

All the experts present agreed that steps should be immediately taken to solve the problem effectively.

2009 年上海英语高考预测作文范文（二）

有些重点中学为了在自主招生或直推中以示公正，往往会公布学生的成绩或排名，请就此现象谈谈你的看法。

With the adoption of the quality-education policy many advanced teaching methods have been introduced to China Meanwhile many middle schools still find a good way to publicize to scores and ranks to introduce good candidates to key universities fairly.

Competition is part of our modern life. If I know the exact position where I am I will spare no effort to catch up with others. Besides we will face the pressure that making scores publicized applies to us. We Senior Three students have no choice but to adapt ourselves to all the pressure which helps us develop our full personality.

Though no one is to blame except myself if the ranks are made known test scores are private. In many experts’ eyes individual student should have his own right of privacy.

It’s time for education authority to create a better environment to promote quality-education where every student can really improve himself.

图表作文

2006年高考英语作文

下表提供了你心仪的两所大学的招生信息。通过比较做出选择，并结合个人情况说明理由。

范文A

Of the two universities listed above, I prefer the one in the north. The main reason is that the tuition is only 5,000 RMB for the university a year, compared with 8,000 RMB for the university in the south. This makes a big diference for a family like a mine, because my father is peasant and the only breadwinner in the family. Studying at the northern university can save my father big money. Another reason I take into consideration is the preference policy the northern university offers. Any candidate wo chooses to study there may gain an extra 20 points, which greatly raises the possibility of my being admitted to this university. Of course, it doesn't mean that it will be quite easy to pass the entrance exam because this university has limited the number of qualified candidates to 10 only. However, I have been doing quite well in school, so I believe I can pass the entrance exam with flying colors.

范文B

Compared with the northern university, the southern one is more to my liking. It is true that in terms of tuition the former is 3,000 RMB cheaper than the latter. However, that's not a problem to me because I can work my way through college once I get admitted. What counts is the reputation it has. Once I enter this school, my future career is guaranteed. Also, the university in the south recruits 20 news students instead of 10, which means that I will stand a better chance of getting admitted. The competition is very keen, though, asyou can see because this university doesn't give candidates any extra points. So all I can do now is study hard, pass the tough entrance exam, and qualify as a student of the university of my choice. 2002 （上海）Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in over 120 words based on the picture and the instructions given below.

简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。

For many children, learning to ride a bicycle can be an interesting experience, but this is not the case with the girl in the picture, who obviously has no fun at all. For fear that she may fall off the bike, her parents are holding the handles, with her grandmother giving a hard push from behind. The three adults are dripping with sweat while the girl is sitting on the saddle wondering who actually is learning to cycle. Without doubt they have gone too far protecting the girl.

Today's parents seem to be too protective of their children, which can be a barrier to their growth and development. Instead, children should be encouraged to learn to do things on their own. Of course, they are likely to run into setbacks, but it is these setbacks that can teach them to be mature and independent. Don't you think so?

假如你是李华，在最近的研究性学习当中，受《21世纪中学生英语报》 （The 21st Century）之邀，你对你所在的班60名同学（男女各半）进行了上网目的的调查。现将调查结果（如下表所示）用英语给报社的编辑写一封信，报道此事，以引起舆论的关注，并提出你的观点和建议。

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注意：1、报道应包括图表所示全部内容，可适度发挥。

2、文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3、词数： 150

4、参考词汇：调查： make a survey

Dear editor，

I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in my class about their purpose of getting on the Internet. ______________________________________________

范文：

The girls’ favorite is chatting, but few boys like it. What the boys like to do most is playing games and the girls also like it. Both boys and girls like to read news or send e-mails on the Internet. Maybe they think it’s the most convenient way to get information from keeping in touch with friends. As for studying, the numbers of boys and girls are equal, but altogether only several of them will use the Internet as a tool to study.

In my opinion, useful as the Internet is, the students had better make better and wise use

of it. Otherwise, it’s impossible for us to benefit from it. Moreover, I also hope the parents will pay enough attention to their children using the Internet in their spare time.

下列表格为某市1996年与2006年人们度假方式的情况比较，请按表格内容写一篇150词左右的短文，并对度假方式变化原因加以简要评析。

[思路点拨] １． 题材：书信； 说明+议论

２． 时态：一般现在时

３． 人称：第三人称

４． 要点提示：（１）上网的目的；（２）读新闻； （３）发送邮件；（４）聊天；（５）

学习；（６）玩游戏；（７）评语

５． 篇章结构：文章可分两段

下列表格为某市1996年与2006年人们度假方式的情况比较，请按表格内容写一篇150词左右的短文，并对度假方式变化原因加以简要评析。

[思路点拨] ６． 题材：书信； 说明+议论

７． 时态：一般现在时

８． 人称：第三人称

９． 要点提示：（１）上网的目的；（２）读新闻； （３）发送邮件；（４）聊天；（５）

学习；（６）玩游戏；（７）评语

１０． 篇章结构：文章可分两段

思路点拨：

1、体裁：比较对照类

2、时态：一般过去时（发表评论时可用一般现在时）

3、人称：第三人称

4、篇章结构：分三段

范文：

The table shows that a greater number of people spent their holidays traveling abroad in 2006. The rate of 2006 (22%) doubled that of 1996 (11%). We are sure that the number will

作文：高三的一年总结(二)

【并列式】

阅读下面的材料，根据要求写一篇文章。

周末，我从学校回家帮着干农活。今春雨多，道路泥泞，我挑着一担秧苗，在溜滑的田埂上走了没几步，就心跳加速，双腿发抖，担子直晃，只好放下，不知所措地站在那里。

妈妈在田里插秧，看到我的窘态，大声地喊：“孩子，外衣脱了，鞋子脱了，再试试！”我脱了外衣和鞋袜，卷起裤脚，重新挑起担子。咦，一下子就觉得脚底下稳当了，担子轻了，很快就把秧苗挑到妈妈跟前。

妈妈说：“你不是没能力挑这个担子，你是担心摔倒，弄脏衣服，注意力不集中。脱掉外衣和鞋袜，就甩掉了多余的顾虑。” 要求选好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题；不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文，不要套作，不得抄袭。

关键词：甩掉了多余的顾虑

谁—事—结果—原因—立意（因果分析法）———–并列式

《甩掉多余顾虑，成就美好人生》

挑秧下田，只有甩掉了外衣、鞋袜这些多余的疑虑，才会脚步稳当地把秧挑好。甩掉多余的顾虑，雄鹰才能在天空翱翔；甩掉了多余的顾虑，鲜花才能开得明艳。

不仅挑秧如此，人生亦然。在人生中，我们要成就大事，成就美好人生，就必须甩掉多余的顾虑。

甩掉生命会受到威胁的顾虑，包拯成为一代清官。

包拯，38岁升任知州，清明廉洁，执法不避亲党，杜绝奸吏。他执法无私，当时奸臣张光佐是宠妃张美人的伯父，凭借张美人的关系，官运亨通。包拯并没有害怕得罪张美人得罪豪权贪官而使自己生命受到威胁，多次向皇帝谏议罢免张光佐，从而激浊扬清，惩恶扬善，谱写了人生华美篇章。//如果包拯没有甩掉生命受威胁这个顾虑，对那些贪官污吏也像其他人一样阿谀奉承，他怎能一心为民？他又怎么会成为上斩奸臣，下斩恶民的铁面无私包青天，名垂青史呢？//事实告诉我们，甩掉多余的顾虑才能成就有价值的人生。

甩掉对名利得失的顾虑，居里夫人成为淡泊名利的科学巨人。

居里夫人一生开拓，发展了放射科学，共获得了10项奖金，16种奖章，107个名誉头衔，特别荣获了两次诺贝尔奖，但这些都不是她研究科学的动力，她从来都不为名利所诱惑，还把英国皇家学会的奖章给女儿当玩具。//正是因为居里夫人甩掉了对名利得失的顾虑，她才能更全力以赴地致力于她的科学事业，最终成为一位为人类文明发展做出巨大贡献的伟人。//如果居里夫人没有甩掉对名利的顾虑，为名利所累，她又怎会有如此巨大地成就？//由此可见，甩掉多余的顾虑才能让我们的事业灿烂辉煌。 甩掉种族和肤色的顾虑，奥巴马成为美国历史上首个黑人总统。

奥巴马，一位非洲裔美国人，在2008年被定为民主党总统候选人，继而被正式提名，成为美国历史上第一位黑人总统。他甩掉了种族和肤色的顾虑，毅然走上了竞选总统的舞台，最后实现了自己的梦想，//如果奥巴马没有甩掉对种族和肤色的顾虑，瞻前顾后，他能够专心致力于自己的政治事业吗？他能成为美国的第一位黑人总统吗？//他的成功无不在向我们宣示，甩掉多余的顾虑才能铸就人生的辉煌。

名人们甩掉甩掉多余的顾虑铸就美好人生，我们又何尝不是这样呢？甩掉甩掉多余的顾虑，可以让我们不再畏首畏尾，发掘潜力；甩掉甩掉多余的顾虑可以让我们不再畏惧困难，勇敢前行；甩掉甩掉多余的顾虑，可以让我们真拼实干，绽放辉煌。

生命不息，奋斗不已。包拯、居里夫人、奥巴马等伟人告诉我们，只有甩掉多余的顾虑，放下思想的包袱，才能轻装上阵，一心向前，成就美好的人生。

来吧，甩掉多余的顾虑，放下思想的包袱，像雄鹰一样无惧悬崖无畏风雨一心冲向云霄；来吧，甩掉多余的顾虑，放下思想的包袱，像花儿一样不怕烈日不惮枯萎全力绽放最美的生命！

【中间段组成思路】

一、分论点+叙述事例+分析论据+总结

①找准自己的位置。

②找准自己的位置，找到适合自己依附的枝头，生命才能达到极致。③世界首富比尔盖茨，本是哈佛大学的一名学生。然而当他感觉到大学所教的内容并不适合自己时，便毅然离开学校，从事自己喜爱的电脑设计工作。盖茨在自己乐土上创建了世界著名的微软公司，引领世界电脑行业的发展，并积累了世界上无人能比的巨额财富。④如果盖茨一味坚持，选错位置，可能也是一位优秀的大学毕业生，在其他行业小有建树，但比起他现在对人类的贡献，就相去甚远了。⑤盖茨正是因为找准了自己的位置，找到适合自己发展的行业，才成就如此辉煌的人生。 因此，找准位置才能真正施展自己的才华 ，成就自己的奇迹。

——《绕树三匝，何枝可依？》

二、叙述事例+分析论据+总结

（叙述事例=人+身份+处境+怎么做+结果）（处境：在他„„的时候 当他„„的时候）

详细叙述

例：正确的选择使人生无悔。//前苏联伟大的无产阶级文学的奠基人高尔基，青年时代一度希望成为一名歌唱家。他曾去报考一个著名的合唱团，竟被录取了。可是，他经过再三考虑，最终放弃了歌唱事业拿起了战斗的笔，成为一代文学大师。//如果高尔基没有作出这样的选择，也许几十年后，世界上只会增加一名平庸的歌唱家而失去一位文学巨匠了。//可见，正确的选择使他的青春无憾，人生无悔。 （《正确的选择，无悔的人生》）

【练习】请以“成功需要付出”为观点，写一段运文字，150字左右。

【课堂训练】：

自己确定中心，选择一种论证方式，将下面语段作适当改动，写一个能恰好论证自己中心的议论文语段。

他是个长相平凡的孩子，小小的眼睛，大大的嘴巴，觉得李连杰好英武，就梦想自己也成为他那样的人物，于是年仅八岁的他告别爹娘离开家乡，独自一人来到少林寺开始了六年艰苦的练武生涯。十四岁时他离开少林寺抱着成为武打明星的梦想来到京城，挤着去当群众演员，被人扣住手腕，从梯子上摔下去，摔得浑身都青了。没有角色的日子里就去建筑工地打工，最痛苦的时候，他带着满身伤，绝望地躺在工地的房间里，望着天花板。这个看上去普普通通的孩子，终于受到了命运的眷顾。16岁时，他被导演李扬挑中，主演独立电影《盲井》，这部电影让他一夜之间从武行变成金马奖最佳新人。后来他塑造的傻根儿、许三多、顺溜、董存瑞又深入到每个中国人的内心。

他就是王宝强。

【立意提示】：

1人不能没有梦想；

2执着让人成功；

3起点不好不重要，只要努力就可以成功。

【分析论证】

1、假设分析

2、因果分析

①宽容又是一种委婉有效的教育方法。②当别人冒犯你时,你能一笑置之