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admin 初一英语作文 2020-05-04 19:33:18 dream 初一 英语作文

Dream
Used to be my fantasyAnd nowIs my goalIt may not be greatBut it’s my goal in life.No dreamWhere to targetDreamIs not a Bobbi dollIt’s my hope.No dreamWhere hopeDreamIs no longer a fiction idealHas transformed into the power of my lifeNo dreamHow to power

修改后:

Dream

Used to be my fantasy

But now

Is what I want to be

It may not be great

But it’s my goal as sure as fate

No dreams

What to target

Dream

Is not a barbie doll

It’s what I want to do at all

No dreams

Where the hope is

Dream

Is no longer a fiction ideal

Has been transformed into the power of my life

No dreams

How to get strength

修改老师:

Andy老师

修改意见:

英文的诗歌体裁,需要押韵,言简,但神需在!和中文诗歌不同,建议多阅读一些英文诗歌,然后再进行创作~

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