my mother with me_1200字

Thespringwindisblowngreenwillow,thewindinthehotsummer,the

autumnwindblowingyellowrice,winterwindblowingthewhiteearth,awind

blowingupmysoul.

Theexamiseverystudentworkachievementexhibition,performanceof

thedirectimpactonstudents’mood.Afterfinalexam,transcriptsofhomethat

day,I’mdisappointedurgently,myEnglishresultis78points,afterreadingthe

report,Iwillnottoutterasinglewordtolieinbed,staringattheceiling……I

donotknowhowlongafter,thedoorsuddenlyopened,mothercameinand

satdownbesideme,notlookingatme,suddenly,onmymotherangrily

shouted:”youstayinbeddoing?Youfailedtheexamisyoudon’tworkhard,

canthisstrangewho……”Waitingforhertofinish,Icried.

Tiredofcrying,todrythetears,Ilookedatmymother.Themothersaw

myheartcalmdown,shealsorestoredthetruecolours,sayaffectionatelyto

me:”theexamisimportant,butyoursubjectiveeffortismoreimportant,as

longasyoutryyourbest,yourlifeisno’.’”……”Myeyesarebright,spiritlifts,

confidenceandbacktomeagain.Loveislikethewind,takemybadmoodwas

nottheleasttracewasfound.Blowing,mymindblowingafresh.

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Exams are often used to check students’ learning result during a period, so the scores always directly impactonstudents’mood.
After the finalexam, I felt nervous every day. When I received the final transcript,I was totally disappointed. I only got 78points in my English test. I lay on the bed without saying asingleword. I started staringattheceiling. I did notknowhowlong it lasted, suddenly, my mother came in and sat down beside me. She said to me angrily, ”What are you doing here? Why you lie on the bed? You failed the exam because you don’t work hard… ” I kept silent and waited for her to
finish, and then Icried.
Tiredofcrying,Idried thetears and lookedatmymother.She saw I have calmed down,shesaid affectionatelyto me, ”The exam is very important, and you must try your best to work hard. Then you can have a better future…” My eyeswere turning bright and I felt confident again. I made up my mind to work harder and never give up.

修改老师：Crystal 老师

初一:张瑞洋

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