Herecomesspring.
Theworldcomestoitself.
ItookmyluggageandhadanextemporaneoustravellastSunday.
Firstly,Iwentcampinginamountainnearmyhometown.Airinthatmountainisfresherthanthatincitywhichsmellsalittledisgusting.HereIhadabiglunchwhichcontainedvariousfoodssuchasfish,chicken,muttonandsoon.Whenwewerehavinglunch,birdskeptcompanywithus.Theysangattractivesongswhichmadeusunbuttoned.
Inmoderncitylife,wearealwaysworriedaboutourpersonalaffairs,andhardlyhavetimetorelaxourselves.So,Imadebestofthisenjoyabletimetoenjoymylife.
Secondly,Iwenttofishingonaboatwithmyfatherinariverwheretreesstand.Flowersweresinging,birdsweresinging,evenfishweresinging.Springisamagicseason.Itcangivepeoplehopeandenergytostruggleforourgoals.
Asawill-graduatedstudent,Ilearnedalotfromthistrip.
AsIsaid,springisaseasonwhichisfullofpowerandmagic.Everythingischanging.Nothingisimpossible.Springstartslivesandputhopeinourmind.HardandboringthoughCollegeentranceexaminationis,Iwillencouragemyselftostruggletotheend,justascockroaches.
Fighting!
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The spring is coming; and the weather becomes warmer and warmer. LastSunday, I went outing with my parents.
First,wewentcampinginamountainnearmyhometown.Airinthatmountainismuch fresherthanthatinthe city. Therewehadabiglunchwhichcontainedvariousfoodssuchasfish,chicken,muttonandsoon. Whenwe werehavinglunch,birdskeptflying aroundus. Theysang songswhichmadeus happier. At that moment, my father said, “Inmoderncitylife,wearealwaysworriedaboutourpersonalaffairs,andhardlyhavetimetorelax ourselves.So,let’s makebestuse ofthisenjoyabletimetoenjoyourselves.” Then,Iwentfishingonaboatwithmyfatherinariverwheretreesstand.Birdsweresinging,evenfisharesinging.
Springisreally amagicseason.Itcangivepeoplehopeandenergytostrugglefortheir goals. Springstartslivesandputs hopeinourmind.Hardandboringthoughcollegeentranceexaminationis,Iwillencouragemyselftostruggletotheend.
高三:吴子鸣
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