We have an English teacher. She is Miss Zhou. She is very friendly, because she has a pair of big and black eyes. Her ears are small. Her favourite season is summer. Why? Because in the summer, she can take the students of our class have a picnic, but also took our class to participate in various activities and fun.Of course, we like her very much, and we respect her. Because she often in our study of the confusion, to help us, teach us how to do this kind of problem.In our view, our English teacher is very good and competent.
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We have an English teacher. She is Miss Zhou. She has a pair of big black eyes and her ears are small. Her favourite season is summer. Why? Because in summer, she can take the students out to have a picnic,and also can take our class to participate invarious activities. We like her very much, and we respect her. Because she often helps us when we are in trouble, teaching us how todeal withdifferent kinds of problems. Inour view, our English teacher is very good and competent.
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