I have a large school.It is on my hometown. It is very beatuiful. There are many flowers , trees and grass there. There is a plastic track,too. I’m in Class 3 ,Grade 6.The one grade has three class in my school.There are seven lessons every day.We must get up at 5:30,because our school bus come here at 6:30.We get to school probably at 6:55.We class begin at 7:50.We eat lunch at school at 12:00. At 3:30,school is over.So we go home very early.After school,I do my homework at home.Some times,I play football with my friends.We are all very happy. This is my school!
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My school is big and beautiful. It is in my hometown. There are many flowers, trees and grass there. There is a track on the playground, too. I’m in Class 3, Grade 6. In my school, every grade has three classes. There are seven lessons every day. We must get up at 5:30, because our school bus comes at 6:30. We get to school probably at 6:55. Our class begins at 7:50. We eat lunch at school at 12:00. We finish school at 3:30. So we go home very early. After school, I do my homework at home. Sometimes, I play football with my friends. We are all very happy. This is my school!
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