I like spring best.Because there are beautiful flowers everywhere.My composition title is hug in spring.Spring is coming.Earth recovery.The birds are flying back again.The earth has returned to its former life.I imagine I can embrace the spring.Spring is so lovely,so beautiful.
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I like spring best. Because there are beautiful flowers everywhere. Spring is coming. Everything begins to come to life. The birds are flying back again. The trees and grass start to turn green. I hope I can embrace the spring. Spring is so lovely, so beautiful.
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五年级:袁泉
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