Hi,My name is Lufeng.English names Henry.I is china boy.My favorite season issummer.I can eat ice cream.I can wear t-shirts.I can’t drink too much cold drinks.My favorite season is summer.How about you?
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Hi, my name is Lufeng and my English name is Henry. I am a Chinese boy. My favorite season issummer because I can eat ice cream andI can wear T-shirts.I like summer very much.How about you?
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