Many people like spring.I like it too.Spring is coming.It is a lovely seacon.The weather is warm and windy.In spring, plants grow and grow.The trees become green and the flowers give off fragrance.They aredancing softly in the wind.There are some beautiful butterflies and bees on them.Some people are going to the park for a picnic.They are happy.
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Many people like spring. I like it too. Spring is coming. It is a lovely season. The weather is warm and windy. In spring, plants begin to grow.The trees become green and the flowers give off fragrance.They aredancing softly in the wind. There are some beautiful butterflies and bees on them. Some people like going to the park for a picnic. They are happy.
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