Dear Miss. Tam,
May Day is coming. I ‘m going to Beijing. I ‘m going by plane. Because Beijing is far. I ‘m going to visit a museum, see the Great Wall and take some photos. I ‘m going to eat lots of food, too. I think I will have a great time.
Write soon,
Best regards,
Linn
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Dear Miss Tam,
May Day is coming. I’m going to Beijing. I’m going there by plane, because it is too far. I’m going to visit a museum, see the Great Wall and take some photos. I’m going to eat lots of delicious food, too. I think I will have a great time.
Best regards,
Linn
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