英语日记欣赏：把爱带给全世界

　　导语：小编觉得写日记是一件非常不错的事情，可以抒发情绪，帮助我们看清一些烦恼的实质，是非常好的宣泄情绪的方式。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语日记，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

　　October 28 Friday Sunny

　　Last week something terrible took place in our class:one of our classmates Xiao Li, fell down the stairs of our classroom building. He got badly hurt. He had to stay in hospital for a long time. How unfortunate he was!

　　So this afternoon all our classmates and our teacher, Mr Yan, were going to the fields to help Xiao Li s family gather the grain.

　　After lunch we set out. It was a long way from our school to Xiao Li s home. It took us half an hour to get there by bike.

　　Then we walked to the fields, bent down and began to work. Some of us worked very quickly though some had never done any farming work before. Time went by quickly and we knocked off about 4 o clock.

　　Xiao Li s parents were thankful. “It s very kind of you to come and help us,”they said. They invited us to have a rest in their houses and gave us a lot of things to eat. After that we went back.

　　Now I realize it s important to help and care for each other, and we should regard the each classmate as a member of a big family.

　　Let s bring love to the whole world.

　　<点评>文章中某些语言上的`运用很到位，点评如下：

　　(1)“一件坏事”不应说成 a bad thing。a bad thing 是“一件坏东西”，故此处用了 something terrible。that 引导的同位语从句改成了“：”，这样更符合英语表达习惯。

　　(2)wound 一般指“用武器致伤”，事故受伤要用 injure 或 hurt.

　　(3)在英语中“严老师”，应说 Mr Yan。

　　(4)field 泛指“农田”时，一般用复数。

　　(5)根据上文 help 应是 went to the fields 的目的状语，而不是并列的动作，故应用不定式 to help。另外，Xiao Li s family 如果用 them代替则指代不清。这种指代不清的错误，中国学生尤其要注意避免。用代词时，一般上下文要有相应的名词存在。