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2020高考英语-《短文改错》专题汇编

Correction 1(2020东北三省三校一模)

A few years before, my family went to a seafood festival in Florida. The food was delicious, the weather was lovely, but the boat ride was great. The last thing was to go on helicopter ride. My little sister was so young to go by herself, so I volunteered to accompany with her on the ride. When I got into the helicopter, I attempt to close the door. Airplanes have doors;so do a helicopter. Wrong!The pilot told me that there was no door as they went skywards. I had never been more frightening in my life. It’s a good thing which the ride lasted for only 15 minutes. No more air rides for me, I swear!

解析：

①before常与完成时连用,ago常与一般过去时连用。句意:几年前,我们全家去佛罗里达参加了一次海鲜节。

②海鲜好吃,天气很好,坐船的经历也很棒。三个分句之间为并列关系,而不是转折关系,故改but为and。

③句意:最后一件事就是乘坐直升机。ride在句中意为“乘坐;搭乘”,为可数名词,此处表示泛指,故加冠词a。

④句意:我妹妹太小,不能独自前往,因此我主动提出陪她乘坐。too...to...意为“太……以至于不能”。

⑤accompany“陪伴”为及物动词,故直接跟宾语,不用介词。

⑥由When引导的时间状语从句中的谓语动词的时态(一般过去时),可推知主句谓语动词需用一般过去时,故将attempt改为attempted。

⑦句意:飞机有门。直升机也有门。根据前一分句中的have可知本句用一般现在时态,主语a helicopter为第三人称单数,故将do改为does。

⑧“我”和妹妹都在直升机上,所以用代词we作主语。

⑨frightening意为“吓人的;令人害怕的”;frightened意为“感到害怕的”。错误处表示“感到害怕的”, 故用形容词frightened作表语。

⑩本句中It为形式主语,主语从句为真正的主语,由that引导主语从句。

Correction 2(2020重庆七校第三次诊断)

The other day, as I walked to school, I passed small construction area. It was not far away in my school. I notice a man bringing a bunch of things: shoes, blankets, some canned food, and clothing.Perhaps the items were gathered from his family and some of his friend. He started laying it down for people to take. Certainly, I was curious about what things would be going. But I rushed there after school. I saw that much of the items were taken by others. I have read lots of inspired stories of kindness. This is probably the sweetest act of kindness I’ve been witnessed so far.

解析：

①句意:几天前,我走路去学校的时候,途经一处小建筑工地。根据句意可知此处表示泛指,area(区域,领域)为可数名词,故small construction area前加a。

②far away from...为固定短语,意为“距离……远”,故将in改为from。

③根据首句中的时间状语The other day并结合语境可知,此处叙述过去的动作,故用一般过去时。

④some of...意为“……中的一些”,of后接可数名词复数形式或者不可数名词。friend为可数名词,故将friend改为friends。

⑤此处替代上文提到的a bunch of things,在句中作宾语,故将it改为them。

⑥句意:当然,我对事情如何发展很好奇。what在宾语从句中作主语、宾语等成分;how在宾语从句中作方式状语。根据句意可知此处表示方式,故将what改为how。

⑦作者对事情如何发展很好奇。因此放学后匆忙赶往那里。两句之间为因果关系而非转折关系,故将But改为So。

⑧items为名词复数形式,故此处用many。

⑨inspired卓越的,激动人心的;inspiring鼓舞人心的。此处修饰stories,故用inspiring。

⑩witness目睹;主语I与witness之间为主动关系,故将been删除。

Correction 3(2020甘肃张掖第三次诊断)

Dear Lucy,

I am very excited to learn that you’re coming to Zhangye for travel. Both my parents missed you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. May is best time of the year to visit Zhangye. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many place of interest I want to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xianfu Street, where is full of local restaurants.

解析：

①句意:我父母都非常想念你。根据语境可知此处用一般现在时,故将missed改为miss。

②“So+be/助动词/情态动词+主语”意为“……也……”。根据上句中的miss以及本句的主语our friend可知需将is改为does。

③形容词最高级前面要加the,故在best前加the。

④a few修饰名词复数形式;a little修饰不可数名词。rain在此处为不可数名词,故将few改为little。

⑤根据本句中的neither可推知需将or改为nor。neither...nor...为固定搭配,意为“既不……也不……”。

⑥根据so many可知后面用名词复数形式,故将place改为places。

⑦like介词,意为“像……”,as介词,意为“作为”。此处指“作为一名志愿者的工作”,故将like改为as。

⑧句意:你来之后可以和我们住在一起。主语为you,宾语和主语人称不一致,故宾语不用反身代词,而改用宾格us。

⑨far away from...意为“离……遥远”;表示距离的数字+away from...意为“离……有多远”。根据three kilometers可知需删除far。

⑩本题考查非限制性定语从句。先行词为Xianfu Street,关系词在定语从句中作主语,先行词指“物”,故将where改为which。

Correction 4(2020青海西宁一模)

With time go by, Chris is now a senior three student that devotes himself in his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as a usual, he attended several classes. In the evening, he studied at home until deep into the night. He was too sleepy and tired on Sunday that he couldn’t work effective. His father came up and advises him to have a break. Soon they came up with a good ideas. They bought a kite which they liked very much and then the family went to the suburbs Chris enjoyed himself fly the kite. The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Chris was energetic and active in class.

解析：

①在with的复合结构中,宾语time与go by “(时间等)流逝”为逻辑上的主动关系,故将go改为going。

②devote...to...为固定结构,意为“致力于”,故将in改为to。

③as usual为固定短语,意为“像往常一样”,故删除a。

④根据that从句可知此句使用so...that...句型,意为“星期天他太困太累,不能有效地学习。”,故将too改为so。

⑤修饰动词work用副词形式,故将effective改为effectively。

⑥and连接了两个并列的谓语动词,根据上文及本句中的came可知此处需用一般过去时态,故将advises改为advised。

⑦句意:很快他们就想出了一个好主意。根据冠词a并结合语境可知idea用单数形式。

⑧先行词为the suburbs(郊区),关系词在定语从句中作地点状语,故用关系副词where引导从句。

⑨在定语从句中,谓语动词为enjoyed。主语Chris与fly为主动关系,故用现在分词作伴随状语。

⑩句意:全家在一起野餐,在户外都感到非常放松。根据语境可知此处不存在转折关系,而为顺承关系,故用连词and。

Correction 5(2020辽宁部分重点中学协作体考前模拟)

Dear Amy,

I’m excited that you will come to visit China during the winter vacations. I?m writing to know that whether you can buy something for me.Now, I’m wondering whether you can buy a Kindle, e-book reader, for me, for the screen of my old Kindle was broken because of the tore cover. I preferred a white one. Besides, the screen measure 19 cm at 13.5 cm will be better. By the way, my budget is about 1,000 yuan. Please help me to buy it if it is convenience for you. I will high appreciate your kindness.

I’m looking forward to your coming soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

解析：

①vacation假期,在此处应该用单数形式。

②whether在句中引导宾语从句,意为“是否”,故删除that。

③此处为同位语,表示泛指,且根据e-book可知应加冠词an。

④tear(撕破)与cover之间为逻辑上的被动关系,故用过去分词作定语。

⑤句意:我更喜欢白色的。此处表示现在的情况,故用一般现在时态。

⑥screen与measure之间为主动关系,故用现在分词作定语。

⑦此处表示“乘”,介词by符合语境。

⑧句意:如果你方便的话,请帮我买一个吧。此处泛指“一个”,故用one。

⑨作表语,故用形容词。convenient方便的。

⑩high作副词时,一般指“高高地”;highly作副词则指抽象意义“高度地”。此处修饰appreciate,故用highly。

知识拓展：convenient为形容词,主语不能为“人”,常用句型为:It’s convenient for sb. to do sth.某人方便做某事。

Correction 6(2020新疆乌鲁木齐第三次诊断)

These day, people break traffic rules and littered everywhere. It does serious harm with our life. I think people should make a effort to change this situation.As for him, I will bear traffic rules in mind. If I ride a bike, I’ll never cross a road until the traffic lights turns green. If I walk, I will forget to use the zebra crossing. Meanwhile, I will make it as my duty to help keep our environment clean or healthy. I will help clean up litter whenever possibly. I hope my behavior will make a difference.

解析:

①由These可知day用复数形式。

②根据语境可知本句用一般现在时态,litter与break traffic rules并列。

③do harm to对……有危害。

④make an effort to do sth.努力去做某事。

⑤根据下文可知要谈论自己是怎么做的,故改him为me。

⑥根据语境可知until从句的时态为一般现在时态,由主语the traffic lights可知用turn。

⑦句意:如果我走路的话,我(永远)不会忘记走斑马线。根据句意可知本句为否定句。

⑧本句中it为形式宾语,不定式短语为真正的宾语,my duty为宾语补足语,故删除as。

⑨clean和healthy为并列关系而非选择关系。

⑩whenever从句的完整结构为whenever it is possible,此处省略了it is,故用形容词possible作表语。

知识拓展:

1.make an effort to do sth.努力去做某事

2.as for至于

3.bear...in mind记住

Correction 7(2020陕西西安工业大学附属中学第四次适应性训练)

The other day after work, I was walking down the street while I saw a boy riding a nice bicycle, one of those bicycle with only one wheel. Dressing in pink from head to toe, he was singing a song which was sounded like a children’s song. I thought he must be total crazy. Just then, a lady dropped 20-dollar bill on the ground, but he didn’t realize it. The guy in pink picked out the money and gave it back to her. After that, he rode on but soon disappeared before the lady could thank him. How a strange and good guy!

解析:

①考查固定句式。be doing sth. when...表示“正在做某事,这时……”;其中when是并列连词,意为“在那时/这时”。

②考查名词复数形式。短语one of...“……之一”中介词of后面的名词要使用复数形式。

③考查固定搭配。短语be dressed in...穿着……;其中dressed是形容词,本句中形容词短语对主语he进行说明。

④考查动词用法。本句中sounded是系动词,系动词没有被动语态,前面的was是多余的。

⑤考查副词。副词作状语修饰动词、形容词或其他副词。所以本句中副词totally修饰形容词crazy。句意:我以为他一定是完全疯了。

⑥考查冠词。本句中的名词bill是一个可数名词。在前面加不定冠词a表示泛指。句意:就在那时,一位女士不小心掉了一张20美元的纸币在地上……。

⑦考查代词。根据上文中的a lady可知这是一位女士,所以使用she。

⑧考查固定搭配。pick up捡起,搭载,无意中学会;pick out挑选出。

⑨考查连词。上下文之间是顺承关系,所以使用and,而不是but。

⑩考查感叹句。当所感叹的是名词的时候,要使用what引导感叹句;当对形容词或者副词进行感叹时,要使用how。

Correction 8(2020辽宁沈阳东北育才学校二模)

I was real nervous when I got to my new school. I grabbed our bag and walked toward the dormitory building. With my joy, I got warm welcome, and was shown to my room. After setting down my stuff and chose my bed, I was led to the sitting room. I saw some girl sitting in the middle of the room, played games. A girl saw me, but she said, “Pleased to meet you.” Everyone had turned around, came running at me and formed a circle around me. After a while, I sat down by Hailey, that was my first friend there.

解析:

①考查副词。really修饰nervous;副词可以用来修饰形容词。

②考查代词。由主语I可知要用与之对应的物主代词my。

③考查固定用法。to one?s joy让某人感到高兴的是。

④考查冠词。welcome作名词表示“接待”时,是可数名词。

⑤考查非谓语动词。after后需用动词的-ing形式。根据前文的setting也可知答案。

⑥考查名词的单复数。girl是可数名词,前面又有限定词some,故要用复数形式。

⑦考查非谓语动词。play和其逻辑主语之间是主动关系,故用现在分词作伴随状语。

⑧考查连词。一个女孩看见我,对我说:“很高兴见到你。”前后是顺承关系,应该用and连接。

⑨考查时态。本句的时态是一般过去时,应该用过去式。

⑩考查定语从句。先行词为Hailey,关系词在从句中作主语,故用who引导非限制性定语从句。

知识拓展:

to one’s+情感类名词,意为“令某人……的是”。

Correction 9(2020新疆乌鲁木齐一诊)

Dear Jack,

I’m very happy to know that you were coming to visit my city by your own. I’m looking Forward to your early arrive!There are a few more well-known places of interesting in my city, so I’d like to show you around when you arrive. If time permit, we can watch some alive Chinese operas and taste some typical Chinese snacks. I suggest you wear some warm clothes, while it’s becoming colder. Remember to tell me the exact time of the flight, I’ll meet you at the airport.

Hope you a pleasant journey.

Yours,

Mike

解析

①句意:得知你要来独自参观我的城市,我非常高兴。根据语境可知此处应用现在进行时表示将来,故将were coming改为are coming。

②on one’s own独自。

③此处用名词作宾语,故将arrive改为arrival。

④我市有几个着名的名胜古迹。此处没有比较对象,不需要用比较级形式,故将more删除。

⑤a place of interest为固定短语,意为“名胜古迹”,故将interesting改为interest。

⑥If引导条件状语从句,用一般现在时态表示将来的动作,主语time为不可数名词,故将permit改为permits。

⑦alive为表语形容词,意为:活着的。live,形容词,意为:现场表演的。此处作定语,意为“现场表演的”,故将alive改为live。

⑧句意:我建议你穿些保暖的衣服,因为天在变冷。根据句意可知此处引导原因状语从句,故将while改为as/because/since。

⑨句意:记得告诉我航班的具体时间,我将去机场接你。逗号不能连接两个句子,两句间需加连词。前后两句为顺承关系,故逗号后加and。

⑩“wish sb. sth.”为固定结构,意为“祝愿某人……”。故将Hope改为Wish。

Correction 10(2020辽宁沈阳二中一模)

I went on a trip to Thailand during the winter holiday, it was wonderful because I tried something I have never experienced before. One morning when we were walking along the beach and enjoying sunshines, someone strongly advised us to go water skiing. Therefore, I didn’t dare to face the challenge because it seemed danger. My friends all encouraged me, so I finally joined in them. At first, I couldn’t stop scream in fright. Later I enjoyed myself and found it amazingly. From the ex-perience I learnt that we should brave enough to try something new. Only in this way can we find the better self to meet any challenge.

解析

①句意:寒假期间,我去泰国旅游了,因为尝试了以前从未有过的经历,所以这次旅游棒极了。先行词为a trip,故用关系代词which引导非限制性定语并在从句中作主语。也可加并列连词and,连接两个句子。

②根据句子的时态可知此处用过去完成时态,表示“过去的过去”。

③sunshine阳光,为不可数名词。

④上句指出有人建议我们去滑水,本句指出我不敢接受这个挑战,根据语境可知两句之间为转折关系,故用副词However。therefore因此。

⑤seemed后接形容词作表语,dangerous危险的。

⑥join in+某项活动,意为“参加某项活动”;join+sb.,意为“加入某人的行列中”。

⑦句意:一开始,我害怕地不停尖叫。stop doing sth.意为“停止做某事”。

⑧it指代water skiing,此处为“find+sth./sb.+adj.”结构,意为“发现某物/某人……”。amazing惊人的;在本句中作宾语补足语。

⑨情态动词should与作表语的形容词brave之间缺少系动词be。

⑩句意:只有这样我们才能找到一个更优秀的自我来迎接任何挑战。根据句意可知此处表示泛指,故用冠词a。

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