My favourite fruit我最喜欢的水果

My favourite fruit is apples.Big apples are very sweet,but small appies are sour.They're sweet and tasty.My favourite apples are red and big.They are healthy and good for me.I don't like grapes. They're sour.
Do you like my favourite fruit? What about you ?
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我最喜欢的水果是苹果。大苹果很甜,但小的确是酸的。他们很甜,很好吃。我最喜欢的苹果又红又大。他们是健康的,对我身体好。我不喜欢葡萄。他们是酸的。
你喜欢我最喜欢的水果吗？你呢？