My Lovely Dog我可爱的小狗

I have a lovely dog. He has a cute name “Little Jack”. He’s my good friend. He is 5 years old. I take it as my family member. He often follows me like a guard. He can watch my house.
I often play with him. I often take him outside for a walk on the weekends. He always waiting for me in front of the house when I go back home. When I am sad, he feels sad, too. He is anxious to please me.
My dog is so affectionate. I love my dog very much. Do you like it?
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我有一只可爱的小狗。他有一个可爱的名字“小杰克”。他是我的好朋友，他5岁了，我把它当作我的家人。他经常跟着我像一个后卫。他可以看我的房子。
我经常和他一起玩。我周末经常带他到外面散步。他总是等在我的屋前，当我回家。当我伤心时，它也感到难过。然后热情的取悦我。
我的狗是那么深情。我非常爱我的狗。你喜欢它吗？